Rough Cut Preview - Feedback
We showed a 1 minute 30 seconds rough cut preview to our class, we then received some feedback regarding our work and any future changes to make.
Positive Feedback:
- They thought that the biting shots worked well and effectively portrayed our narrative.
- They thought the general mise-en-scene worked well in the performance scenes - they especially liked the costumes and the lighting, as they felt it effectively portrayed our period aesthetic.
- They also liked the bedroom shots and felt the furniture and costume was very appropriate to the period.
- They specifically liked the 'ocean liner' shot which used a Dutch Tilt movement.
Constructive Criticism:
- They thought that there were too many bedroom shots - we have decided to respond to this feedback by cutting out some of the footage and decreasing the amount of screen time given to this particular scene.
- Another issue raised was the use of American Dollars, which confused people as to why we used dollars despite a British location and a British accent at the start of the video. We are still undecided on how to fix this issue, but some suggestions are the use of an American accent overlay at the start, or getting rid of the scenes that feature the dollars.
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